Song Lyrics 2

Another song written in the cafeteria of general mclane high school.  This one is very rough.  Lines need added and some need changed.

Song: Sorry, My Name's Not Romeo

Verse 1
I gave you the world, then you asked for
the stars
You said forever and always; even near
or far
But i've learned one thing about you
that nothing you say will ever be true

Pre-chorus
But I think that you shouldn't ever leave
me.
We should run away, with the world to
see.
But you've got other plans with God
knows who
Maybe it's time that i finally say
to you

Chorus
That I am tired of you lying
And i am tired of trying day by day
*I'm breaking my back just to make you
smile
Yeah you only notice every once and a
while
I really cant take much more of this
pain
You'd put a knife in my back if it
means that you'd gain
*I can't get through the day without you
on my mind
A girl who really cares, you know
its hard to find
I need to move on and get rid of
this shame
Forgive and forget, you know its just
not the same.

Verse 2
I keep telling myself that this isnt true
That you wouldnt build me up just to
drop me off in the blue.
But i'm trying so hard just to get
through the night.
With you on my mind, I'm just one big
internal fight.

Pre-chorus 2
I got this angel on my shoulder telling
me to get away from you
But the demon on the other makes it
all sound so true.
But you've got plans with God knows
who
Maybe its time that i FUCKING say to
you.

Chorus


(The rest is still a work in progress)


Feedback!  Thanks!

Song Lyrics 1

So if you are ever peering into a classroom in General McLane High School, and you see me leaning back in my chair, armed with a death stare directed at my phone, it probably means I am way too emotionally overwhelmed with myself to focus on class, and I am simply writing lyrics for potential songs into my phone.  Well, I finally decided to share them with you.  In no way do i think they are good.  They may not flow well to you, but to me they do with a tune that i wrote them too.  So here goes nothing. 

First Song:  Take it Or Leave It.

Verse:
I swear to God I wont let this get to me
And if i can help it, i'll keep my mouth shut
But I wont stop, and i'll never tell of us
I can't help but wonder if this is another
temporary rush that ends in weeks
You said you want it, but also
you want him too
So should I wait around or should
I just move on through

Chorus
I cannot take this any longer
Even if I do, you know I wont get any stronger
These things you say to get me through the day
Are they real or not? I wish you'd stop
these games we play
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And i cannot shake this pain that you've caused
And even if i do, i'll always be thinking of you
These bullshit attempts at making
nice wont get me through
Are you real or not? I wish you'd
stop these fucking games
'Cause I cant take it anymore

Verse 2
I swear to God that i will move past you
Those stupid laughs and antics that you do
You always talk of how much that you
"truly care", but how am I supposed to
believe it when all i can get is a glare
Its fucking bullshit when you say we are
meant to be
But i can't argue, so i guess i'll just agree

CHORUS AGAIN

Bridge
And I have tried.  Every method of coping
with these ongoing feelings I have
But all I've got are these shitty lyrics that
I've attempted to write for you
So if you've really moved on from the
life that we had
Then I wont expect you to care when I
am loving my life with her.


I'd love to hear what you think.  Don't be mean, but be honest.  They need work.